Linking words:
although, though, even though, however, in spite of, despite, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas, while, but, on the other hand, in contrast, on the contrary, again, and, also, besides, equally important, first (second, etc.), further, furthermore, in addition, in the first place, moreover, next, too |
- Introduction:
From general to specific
- Paragraph I: Arguments for (advantages)
- ParagraphII: Arguments against (drawbacks)
- Conclusion: Summarise the points discussed and give your point of view either for or against.
Example:
The mobile is one of the most important means of communication. However, its over use can cause harm to people.
- INTRODUCTION: We should relate the mobile to its general context which is communication. Then, write about its specific use.
Only through communication people can know one another and not confront. In the past people used simple tools for communication, such as fire, drums, or pigeons. Later, thanks to the development of writing, they started to exchange letters. Following that, they used the telegraph. However, today they can send written messages, or videos thanks to the mobile which has certainly expanded worldwide. However, this small gadget may cause harm if it is overused.
General Specific
- PARAGRAPH 1 : ARGUMENTS FOR
The mobile is used for multiple purposes. It can be used either to contact a family member, or a friend via sound or messages. Furthermore, many youngsters use it to store their music, or play games. For businessmen its their mobile office where they can get in touch day and night with their employees and partners. More than that, the cell phone can help people in emergencies. For instance, if they ever have a car breakdown, or an injury, the mobile resolves the problem on the spot. Students can contact their parents or classmates. The mobile helps people in different situations.
- PARAGRAPH 2 : ARGUMENTS AGAINST
On the other hand, if used excessively, the mobile can cause harm to people. Mobiles may cause harm to people’s brains if we overuse them according to some researches. Moreover, they can be the cause of several road accidents if used in driving. They are sometimes a source of disturbance when we are relaxing, having a rest, or attending a course. The ringing of the cell phone interrupts your sleep, your rest, or distracts you concentration.
- CONCLUSION: We sum up the points discussed in paragraph 1 and 2, and we give our opinion.
All in all, the mobile is useful to people; however, if it is not used efficaciously, it may have negative impacts on them. Therefore, we should not utilize the mobile unless it is very necessary.
Summary of the points discussed Point of view.
Write about these topics:
- The use of the mobile has become of paramount importance in our life. However,
some people complain about its dangers.
- The internet has certainly revolutionized our way of living positively and negatively.
- Should drivers of automobiles be prohibited from using cellular phones?
- Technology makes communication easier in today's world. Many people choose to work at home in front of a computer screen. What danger does the society face depending on computer screens rather than face-to-face contact as the main means of communication? Are we the prisoners of the progress?
- Should the animals be used for scientific research? Is it humanly?
- Should restrictions be placed on the use of mobile phones in public areas like restaurants and theaters?